The titled of this poem it sounds very interesting...i love the way u write, it flowed well and i think it nicely written. well... great job5/5

Hey, this poem is really good 5/5

I like this good job 5/5

Good job Noni. that's kinda how I feel right now. kind of. read my new one, please. See you at school.

So much emotions on this piece, its very mysterious for me, I know theres a lot more stored in this deep poem.

"Hear the footsteps as my path unfolds
Watch as gates open to a story untold"

that was my favorite line, very deep.

This is deep . I love it . So much emotion .
Yu have mad skill, hun` .
Keep it fresh .
5/5
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Oh my gosh so amazing how you discribed the emotions, it flowed very well also, nice work...
Karms.

Well done, i liked this one. keep it up
xxxxx

This poem has much, much better flow. I absolutely love this line:

Everything rotting in a dying bouquet

it just works so well with the rest of your poem.

5/5

I love this poem! I ususally choose which stanzas I like the best but this poem was simply incredible! The only problem i found was on your last line it should be breathe* not breath :)
Excellent Job Babe
5/5

Wow---Great write! There is so much emotion in it and the flow is so smooth---Very sad, but amazingly written. 5/5. Keep it up---