I love the ambiguity of this poem-it can mean many things to each reader.Short and mysterious, yet emotion and thought slip through.I know it touched me in a certain way.I love this style of writing and look forward to reading more of your work.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Honestly, I feel this way sometimes! Very beautiful, and well-written!

I love this.. short, in the way that it can mean exactly what you want it to mean but still mean it truly if you get me? Anyway.. great write x

Its short, but I like it. Its one of those that I wish had more to it, but I understand writing a short poem, how sometimes other people feel that it is incomplete, even when it feels just fine to me. I like it =] 5/5