Very deep emotional piece...

If poems could break the heart you would have just shattered mine. An excellent emotionally moving write

Aww Dear Angela sadness is written all over this piece .
Yet is in times like these that we must pick ourselves up, wipe our tears and reach for the happiness we deserve .
For we can only find happiness, if we truly forgive ourselves first .....

Much love, dear friend

Haunting.

My friend you have written a master piece. It appears you have bared your soul and to know that you are in such a place hurts. Stay strong.

Oh my...angela dear, beautiful an emotional penned you potray here, though short, but writing so well, angela, i'll enjoyed my read your poem, even thought you not often post here, keep them coming myfriend, take care, hugs! bert~

This poem was powerful...the words used anf format really convey deep feelings in this write! Great write.

Omg that is awsome..i really like it
full of such and pain and emotion that is expressed
well done.

Wow.... very powerful and beautiful flow. I love the title also. take care XXXXX
JL

Reminds me of myself.. :/

=)

Hey good job...i really liked it.

This is very deep I love it.

A real pro keep it up!
XX

I love it

Wow, this one is so powerful and effective, short yet very deep. I can relate to it. You expressed emotions simply but excellently.

Really short and powerful, a talent which is hard to master.

The creativeness of the pool of tears is one thing, but to add an extra spin on it, you make them guilty tears. It really shows the regret of something, something that haunts this character for their life and is the cause of this deep depression which lingers and does not disappear.

Craving forgiveness is really powerful - and for me, it indicates that the guilt comes from hurting someone very close, and perhaps they have never forgiven something you did or did not do/say.

I think this poem is honest and I am sure we all have this puddle of tears, of guilt, and we all have someone we want to forgive us for something. Very relatable poem, you worded it well in such a short poem.