Comments : Mercurial Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Bill your poetry is always if the highest quality, and this piece is no different to your other great writes. You have a certain knack for this, a natural god given gift that I am priviledged to share with you :o)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimmaly

    Speechless.........just wonderful. Thats all I can say. Just a wonderful well writen work of art.
    -Kimmaly

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I am speechless . This poem is just . Wow . Beautifully written .
    Just .. wow .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Bill you just have the most beautiful way with words.
    You pull me right into your poem and hold me captive with your poetic beauty.

    I just can not choose a favorite stanza all four were just amazing.
    I just had to say " awww that is so beautiful " the last 2 ending lines.

    Your lady love is so lucky to have such a beautiful heart such as yours to write her breathtaking, heartfelt love poems.
    I have loved your love poetry from the very beginning days on this site and will continue to do so forever.

    You bring such beauty to the word 'love' that even the coldest of souls would wish for such sweet love after reading this poem.....

    Wonderful write, my dear friend

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really like this poem. It has really filling and meaning. 5/5:) Hey if you get a chance could you please read some of my love poems and tell me if there is anything I can do to make them better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexis

    Ah! you are a romantic at heart and the love your pour on paper is simply astounding.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    From onw poet to another, Bill, this is astonishingly beautiful. You have such a wonderful way with words when it comes to poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Bill this is awesome. I love the flow and the sentiment. Awesome as usual.

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Nikoshiana

    Love this, its so deep and moving