Flying

by CiCi91   Oct 18, 2006


How high, must I Fly
To reach your eyes
How low must I go
For you to know

All the angels in the sky
All want me to die
For all the sins I have done
There's no mercy Angels
No god of forgivness
Look what I have done

How can I, Be selfish
If I can see, This is how its supposed be
Me and you meant, to be together
When I'm with you, I can fly forever

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good start. Overall you got good vocab and flow.

    "If I can see, This is how its suposed be
    Are me and you meant, to be together
    When I'm without you, I can fly forever "
    Here's some ideas:
    It's spelled "Supposed"
    "Are you and me meant to be together
    The last line is confusing, it makes it sound as if you would rather be single

    Keep it up

More Poems By CiCi91