Sometimes when I think about you

by Samantha   Oct 18, 2006


I believed you once,I believed you twice
Believe me there won't be a thrice
I know the kind of games you play
You love just to throw it all away
You lied to me once,you lied to me twice
I have to say you're not very nice
How can you look deep into my eyes
When the words that you promise are only lies
The promises that you would always make
Were the ones you swore you would never break
You said that you loved me you swore that you cared
So when goodbye came I wasn't prepared
Sometimes it hurts and sometimes I cry
Sometimes at night I just wish I could die
And when the tears pour down like rain
I sometimes cause my body pain
So carve your name upon my wrists
I'll hold your hand while you make fists
I'll hate the fact that I love you
But even more that you don't love me too
I'll love you till the day I die
Forever and ever I will always cry
I'll never forget you and you've alread forgot
That just yesterday you loved me a lot

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse Miller

    The sylabals don't quite match the other lines and don't stay consistent which throws off your rhythem, and their were some editing you could do with your word choice, but that all comes with practice. With that aside I loved your attitude! you were blunt without being too blunt, and you were angry because you hurt such a mix of emotions portrayed so well - A rare talent...

  • 18 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    Really strong words well done