I love this poem. It reminds me of someone. lol. umm...i want to read more like this. keep it up!!!

-Carrie-

I really like this poem beautifully written. it reminds me of my boyfriend. I'm afriad to fall in love with him cuz f pain. 5/5

This poem is one poem that i was looking for

This poem is one poem that i was looking for

Hey! great job with this poem! very nice. love is a strage and wonderous thing, isn't it?

Great Job...
The only stanza I found a problem was:
Could This Be The Boy
Who will make my dreams come true?
Could This Be The Boy
Who will never make me blue?

But my two favorite ones are:
I'm scared to love this boy
I'm scared of getting hurt
Scared of a broken heart
Scared of being treated like dirt.
and
I don't want to get hurt
But I think I could love this boy
I just hope my heart
wont get played like a toy.
Great Job Babe!
5/5

I defiantly know how this feels! 5/5

~Kristina