Comments : Starfish

  • 17 years ago

    by Mayra

    Hey ashley good poem keep up the great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Carolina g

    AWW... Tahts so CUTE:) I agree with this a bunch, every guy should read it...keep up the good poetry :)

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    An honestly 100% unique look on the heart. It's nice to read a new twist on something. I enjoyed. Jpoet* :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Percival

    I love it ^^
    it makes me wanna cry!!!!
    lol

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very cute! Well written and I enjoyed it. 5/5 for you.
    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    WoW ur poem was really good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I like this alot. The flow was perfect, and i like how you compared your heart to a starfish. That is very unique. A great write! Keep it up. =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    AWWW!!!! This is a beautifully written poem. I loved everything about it. You use some wonderful imagery in it and you worded it perfectly. I only have one suggestion though. I think that you should break it up into stanzas so that it will be easier to read. Great job! 5/5

    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by awww

    Loved it... great job in comparing your heart to a starfish... i bet alot of people feel the same way too... its a great poem... i liked the rhyming too... it was easy to read and feel the meaning... 5/5! keep writing!

    ~angel~

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmmm very nice titled STARFISH. actually it make me smile i love the message very wonderful.. wish u can write more 5/5 keep up the good work

    god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow, wonderful! I love it! So sweet and I loved how you compared your heart to a starfish! Great job! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Excellent! I loved your rhyming... I love the last 6 lines and the beginning four. Great Job!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie Bug :)

    I loved this poem. It captured the thoughts of many. And i absolutely loved the way You compared hearts to starfish. Amazing. 5/5