THis is also really cute. I like how you made everything seem real. It put very vivid pictures in my mind

Dont worry about people being harsh, i thought it was a fun poem about a happy time of year, maybe you could hand out copies of this poem to your family and friends at christmas as everyone would enjoy it x

I think you did a great job by this being your first poem you have every tried to use Imagery in. I think that the flow was well and you painted a perfect picture too. I only had a problem with the second stanza:

Snow has fallen
on the floor outside
Parents are busy sending the presents
to Santa Claus to hide.

I think that this stanza should be changed to:

Snow has fallen
On earths floor outside
Parents are busy wrapping presents
So from the children they can hide.

It's just a suggestion anyway. Great job! 5/5

Keep up the great work
Letty

Hey, i think that is a great poem and if it is really your first then you should really not stop writing couse u obviously have the talent in fact im gonna put you a some of my favourites. So well done it describes christmas really well and it even got me excited about christmas.

I think it was a very nice Christmas poem! Very vivid imagery.
My favourite part is:
"Snowflakes melt against the window pane
Casting a peaceful glow"
it makes a nice view ^^

I think the imagery is great...dont think poetry always has to rhyme, its about you expressing yourself... i love it but i hate christmas it always depresses me lol