Very flowing. A nice write. Good job, :). 5/5

Kind Regards,
Luna

Hey. good job with this poem. i'm usually not a huge fan of sonnets but i was way into this one.

you have quite the choice of words which makes your tet very colorful.

like the words intoxicates. serenity, and elated.

anyways, great job. 5/5 :)

As always luv readin ur work its alwaysa so unique. keep it up =] xx

Beautiful penned, The clouds creep up, dimming the light to grey, then it turns pitch black taking the memory away. did i mentioned that, lol... all i can say here, perfect penned, unique yet creative written, well done!

bert ~

Words to capture a woman's heart! Dear friend, I dare say this a truly beautiful epic of a love poem.It brings a smile to my face to read such lovely words from such an amazing poet.

Hey we got something in common I too love women. lol nice write. great word usage.

Nice wording, makes me wanna make such a poem about you men, hehe!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid