Wow. this is such an emotonal poem. u really now the write words to choose. its very captivating. well done.!!

sophie:)

p.s wuld love ur opinion on a few of mine. xo

I really like this every stanza speaks out to me fantasic work keep it up hon! xox sam

Hello Poet!
this is truly sweet..I love the last line in the 2nd stanza! very great piece!
you know what I'm goin to say, i so wasnt in the mood to read any poems, but when it comes to my fav ppl, I can not resist Lolz!

I'm sorry I've been away from writing since my bf broke up with me..but I assure you I miss writing and I tend to write a love poem SO SOON I hope...thou its been only 4 or 5 dayz since the break-up day :S

Anyway Keep that up
Good Luck
NemO xxxxxxxxx

What a poem, you describled them with beautiful emotions penned, and there are nothing else to say here, all is said, well done!

What a poem, you describled them with beautiful emotions penned, and there are nothing else to say here, all is said, well done!

Wow...what a wonderful poem... very interesting.

Excellent..love it

I loved this writting great poem

Beautiful poem i loved every detailed line and the emotion you put into it :)

Niccee.
I loved the way it flowed.

I Love It, Its just so dark

Wow that was really great

Your wording was brilliant and due to that, the flow fitted perfectly.
Excellent poem! Dark and stormy! Just how i like them!
5/5
*Gem*

I liked this very much, although, I must ask. And, maybe I'm just being a BIT ignorant, but I was wondering how you happened to choose the title for this piece. I thought I got the feel of your write here, but maybe I just didn't get the message. Still, all in all, I thought it was well done.