I'm not certain, but I get the distinct feeling this is about playing away. Interesting topic for a love poem.

Short, succinct and to the point with a start, middle and end. Your choice in diction is a little simple... straightforward even, but it is in keeping with the secrecy aspect and it gets the job done.

Bret

It had a good feeling and imagination but maybe some of it didnt flow as well as it could have but still keep going as this was written after a break. x