WOW! I loved this one, particularly the last stanza.
Everything about it was perfect. 5/5

There WERE a few grammatical mistakes, and yu left out a word or two (At least I think yu did), but Grammatically Challenged has caught them all .
But yeah, other than those, this is a beautiful poem . I absolutely love how yu ended it .

&&Thank you for yur comment .
I didn`t realize that error till yu pointed it out to me xD
..ღ__MiNDYY

Awww... such a sweet poem... i dont read poems about life much but this was really good and i liked it... i didnt really expect that you were gonna be the new guardian angel... liked the meaning and story behind it... 5/5! keep writing!

~angel~

Wow very beautiful... i really believe angelsss this poems are very inspiring and it inspires me a lot thanks for sharing5/5

Hi sweet heart
i love this poem and as always this is an excellent work by you so keep it up honey,i love you!

you dear H
Suda

Well done. you came 3rd in my contest, i did love the poem and i could find anything wrong but i didnt like it as much as the other 2.
It was still really good, so dont let that put you off, you are very talented. xxxxx

I enjoyed this heavenly poem

Was on disscussion board and read that u needed help hun u got it down this is a 5/5.

This poem was perfect...
i loved the last part...

"I made it to heaven happily
and found out what I was chosen to do
My job is now to keep people safe
I'm now a Guardian Angel too."

it was filled with love from the angel...
you got the talent...

5/5

Spectacular.
And that's all I need to say.

I think it’s overall a good poem. It has a strong beginning and a strong end, though you seem to have lost trail in the part between. It isn’t bad but it’s just lesser than the rest of your poem.
Further, you have written a wonderful description of an angel, with all the gold, white and light. I can really imagine how it would look like. And the emotional part is fine as well. So 4/5.

For the Lord has prepared you a place,

doesnt make much sense,
how about

' the lord will take you to a better place'

and

And it nearly made me blind

perhaps,

The power made me feel blind.

duno jus a suggestion
good poem though loved the descriptions xxx alex xxx

Talented, one word to describe you! This was amazing and wonderfully written! Loved this one bunches! Hehe. :) Keep writing! 5/5

Innoc3ntStar

Ur poetrys are soooo amazing