Ill take you back up and drop you again
But this time Im gone it wont be the same
You must learn to fly without my wings
Believe inside and choose what life brings
^^
Amazing stanza Tyrone.

Thank-you for sharing your poetry, I can't wait to read more. So much emotion portray in this piece.

Take care, Luanne

Thank-you for your comments on my poetry Tyrone, they are greatly appreciated.
Can't wait to meet the poet behind the words.
Take care, my friend.
Ididn't have an e-mail for you so I decided to thank-you in your comments.

HEY TYRONE I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM...
I WISH THAT U WILL LIKE MINES WELL U ARE A REALLY NICE PERSON AND I KNOW EVEN THO U ARE HEARTBROKEN U ARE STILL NICE IF THERES ANYTHING I CAN DO FOR U JUST TELL ME
XOXOXOXOXOXO
LOVE PRINCESS
P.S KEEP YOUR HEAD UP TYRONE

Excellent job5/5

god bless

HEY SWEETIE WELL THIS IS ME I WAS LOOKING FOR U BUT I SEE U AINT ON SO JUST WRITE BACK WHEN U OK SWEETIE
MISS YOU
LOV3
PR!NC3SS

Thank u sweetie well i hope to take to u soon boo i will be in the chatroom so just aim me baby

I liked that...very motivational

I liked that...very motivational

This was a well written poem. Very short though, I'd like to see it a little longer. The flow and the structure was good. Very motivational peice of work. Good job!!!

Peace, Joe

In words u cannot speak to thee,
i hope the next will be about me..

Wow.....very awsome poem...i like it a lot....a 5/5 from me!