Wow! I really like this. I was drawn in from the first stanza. Great poem! I like the flow of it and the rhymes. Keep them up! xx

Love the imagery. awesome analagous poem with great flow and emotion. if any1 gives this poem less than 5/5 they can't read

You've one 'eck of a talent there mel!

very good solid piece, you should post some more! =)

5/5 keep 'em coming!

Lovely!! i love it

Hey i rlly love this poem. thanks a lot for the comment. keep writing. =)
sarah~