by Darryl Card Oct 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
A beautiful angel you have come to me |
by Sweet lig
This poem is really good , the message, the emotion are pretty good. but one thing can distract me coz some lines are long some are short.. but though still worth most importand i understand whats this poem express and i truly appreciate.. i know u can write more goo like this so keep on writing.. |
Omg thats beautiful....i almost cried...its beautiful...thats how i feel. you write like i do from your heart and your heart is very caring and nobody seems to understand how you really feel bc you cant tell them to their face. everybody just seems to break your heart over and over and you think that there is nothing that can stop the pain. you want to be happy and feel loved and have people love you like you love them..i really understand you. |