Although it was a little short, it flowed in a perfect rhythm. It was just like reading a poem out of one of those kids novels. Nice job.

HAHAHHAA loves it!! You're so cute with your funny poems lol.

5/5

-Jenna.

That was different but really funny. Nice job! But I worry about you...lol Jpoet*

I dipped my toes into the sea
A shark came up and bit off three
Now I'm stuck with only seven
The other three, have gone to heaven.

^^^
I just love this part.....lol

Very creative imagination Jeannie, well at least I hope it is not real...but if it is sweet lady, please keep that pole by your side....LMAO
Take care, Luanne

HAHAHA!!! Very Funny!!!! LOVED IT!! 5/5

Lol this was a very well written poems, just like all your others it inspried me,, you are truly a great writer, i have read quite a lot of your poems, and not a single one seems to be the same, you are very imaganative, and it deffantly shows through your writting. I loved this poem, and it was very childish, which is always fun to read. hope to read some more soon.
Please could you read and comment on some of my poems, i would love to hear from you. Thanks...Kirsty

:P you have my vote. 5/5

Wicked lol a bit like one of the nursery rhymes. ive forgot what its called but anyway like your poem

Wow that is some really funny stuff

I loved it!! Hope it didn't really happen though!! Great Job!!

Poor poor poor toes.....*cries cuz toes are in heaven* I LOVED IT it was so darn cute....*gives you new toes* hehe
5/5

Just goofy girl

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Haha thats cute!