This one is really deep, you did what most want, lay your emotions in a minimum of words, I must say that not many are able to do this but you did a very good job.

I love this.. its angry and its truth, thanks for your comments as well- they mean alot

Deep. I love it and thanks for your comments Cy!

Nice poem, i like dark shit like this...

Wow this sounds like something I have told my sons dad before except for the last part about 'like me'.... i like this one.

Wow thast really deep..i dont think i was breathing the whole time i read it...and i read it twice lol.
great job don't evener stop righting..i love your work..go on my page and send me a prvt mssg when ever you write something new :)

Excellent. while i'm waiting for your next- i can't help reading these again. it is eerie how well i relate to your stuff. thank you so much for your kick-a** comments. they never fail to make me smile! :)

The hurt that your words portrayed was stiffeling, it brought tears to my eyes becasue I know exactly what you are saying.
Keep up the amazing writing.

Again man that was awesome it feel like we are on the same wave man, this one was excatly how I feel 9 times out of ten. keep up the kick a** poems man

Love it <3!

Lol how ironic...someone said to me 'welcome to the darkside' just the other day...and i like this poem...it reminds me about pple im mad at and y im mad at them (which is a good thing) lol so i hope it makes u feel better knowing u helped me keep from putting my heart on the line again (and believe it or not that is a good thing)...lol if ive confused u just be happy...my rambling was a compliment

Can tell that you have been there. We can learn from others.

Love it again!! you say it so clearly

This is FABULOUS! Your words are just as good as mine.... Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it!

Wow, well doesnt that hit deep.
Freekin amazing!

Another great poem!! way deep. good jobb

All of my poems arnt from my experiences there from people who i knows experiences

That was amazing. i loved it.
exspecailly the last part.
wow.

never stop writing.

I love this poem.. In so few words, you say so much!