My Suggestion

by Jennifer   Oct 25, 2006


There’s not a sadder story not one that could be told
People think the illness is something not so cold
When u thinks of love u think of warmth and need
But please I introduce its brother full of hatred and greed.
Hate is a strong word always followed by love
Love is a strong feeling that there’s sadly way too little of
And as I describe what you might already know
This if for the innocent ones who have not given love a go.
While it sound extravagant adventurous and fun
Love is often fatal and will lead u to a gun.
Crying only makes u see how bad it truly is
And hating is the worst part of having to live
So if I could make a suggestion it would be not to love at all
Not to dance the tango not to ever fall.
But to live with only love for the one
The one that really counts
To love yourself with every once.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LoveYourMan

    Wow this is really good...sad though if you think about it...love can be amazing if you find the right person...it sounds like you had a hard time with love..but dont give up...theres the prefect love for everyone!...and i know i probably sound like Dr.Phil or something but...really dont give up on love...its there...well i think i have made enough of a fool out of myself..lol...but i dont care..i love the poem...sorry this is so long...well great job!