Comments : Ode to fantasy

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very calming piece for me, I must say.
    I wonder if I am seeing the same place that the poem created
    and the place in your
    painted in
    your mind.

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Very tranquil and enchanting. A nice peaceful write.

    "A realm of pleasant fantasy"

    Loved those lines

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by ether

    This was very beautiful, it created very vivid images, but for an ode, I felt it could of been a bit more in-depth.
    Anyway, that was just a thought. I loved the use of vocab and I loved the rhyme scheme you used, aaba. Great poem, 5/5

    jess ~

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Oh wow. This was cute. it was like something you would read about in a children's book or something. Lol, I don't know, it was cute though.

    "where butterflys speak
    of endless possibilities"

    ^^ Those lines were amazing.

    5/5

    -Jenna.

  • 17 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I love this style, I have never written an ode, but read many, and this ranks with the highest, thanx for your lovely comments on mine. Timothy r

  • 17 years ago

    by ricky

    You never fail to amaze me. I truly love this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    Deana,

    What a beautiful poem ~ I don't know any other way to put it other then ~ great job!

    Connie

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Very nice, 5/5. Keep up the good work Deana :)