I really like the irony theme you have here. It's cute and sad at the same time. I think you could have used a lot more emotion and depth here- that would make the poem more worthy of the 5 I gave you.

Keep on writing; your poems seem like a fun read. I'm gonna come back and read some more.

I LOVE THIS POEM!!! logan is weird. you shoulc have got first... me serious... lol... but seriously... you should have got first... ill hit him in the hallway or something tomarrow... lol