Hey!! you know who this is!! It's ur best friend!!! well anyway my comment.....It's really good, keep the poetry going girl!!! Luvs DeadGirl

I was scard at first for real 9/10
keep up the good job girl excelent if i was a teacher i will give u an A-

Very very sad and dark, emotions are well expressed.

Regards,

Steve

Emotions very well expressed in this poem... A dark and powerful piece! Enjoyed the read.

Thanks guys, i love getting feedback for my poetry. love ya-dancingskeletons