Oh!!! My, You have truly captured a
broken heart longing for her loves
return.
I was taken in by this read so much
I wanted to give you hugs and cuddles
myself. Thank you for sharing,
Bogie

Wow... This poem expresses something we all feel sooner or later in a descriptive, vivid, and universal way. Thats the thing about love though. Theres no control. You can't make someone love you enough and you cant stop yourself from loving them, or leaving the tree... Great Write!!! ^_^

~^_^Anthony^_^~

Wonderful poem Mary, wonderful, may the best ever come to you!!!

Great ending. loved that...and thanks so much for the heartfelt comment on my poem!
Charisma*

Yes yes, a lot of people have been down this road and have felt these feelings...its horrible, but you release them gently Cudds and your writes always come out beautifully!
I loved this piece!
Chelsey