Oo, i liked the lines "beautiful words without conviction/sweet stories told in fiction"

Absolutely beautiful sad penned, writing well with beautiful emotions, oh..., a heartbreaking...
Whisper a sad goodbye
with tear filled eyes.

Deana, First off, let me take this moment to thank you for commenting on my poetry. Glad you liked it.

Secondly, a very profound write with such heartfelt emotions. Especially liked the stanz:

Not important enough to say goodbye
Your love,your words ,all just lies
Moonlit nights,now just dreams
No vows of love,no song to sing

Good job, and keep it up.

Happiness
Jeannie

Awh, you do it again. Beautiful, sorry i ahven't comment in a while, i've been "busy" with "stuff" but when i read this i had to. it was so beautiful and acctually brought tears to my eyes.
love you doll
-amberinaa*

Thanks for taking time to read my poem :) your a really good writer 5.5 I look forward to reading more

"Beautiful words without conviction
Sweet stories told in fiction
Dreams cast away,like pollen in wind
A heart left broken,trying to mend"

The stanza that stood out for me.. i can't pin point why this poem has really hit me hard, but it has...
Very well written as always.. i wouldn't expect anything worth less than a five from you =) (I think thats phrased right =)
so 5/5
*Gem*

Deena,
How beautiful and yet so sad. I really loved this poem. The words choices were great. It really was heart felt. Excellent job!

I also like the words you used and it is sad. A great poem 5/5 :D