Its BEAUTIFUL i love your writieng! its relaly wonderful!!! YOU SHOULD look at some of mine....
-Marina

Wow thats all i can say this poem was very sad. it kept of eyes glues to the screen i dint want to miss a single syllable!

Really good poem, so dark and painted in black and red. I love your writing! 5/5

I love this poem. u really know how to write poems good job... oh and i wrote u a message too

Nice writing:D
gr8 poem enjoyed it gr8ly:D
keep up the good work
tk care bree x

Nice poem its really touching in a way. but i like it. read one that i did calls "i ask"