OMG Bill,
*fans face of tears* this is absolutely beautiful !

Your knight is what I long to be...at your service in chivalry
Your lover I long to be...letting my passion set your body free
^^^
breathtaking these 2 lines !

The ending stanza is just pure magic. And I love the entire piece.
Lucky lady who holds the key to your heart, and I someday hope to meet you both !

Wonderful read Bill, you never fail me dear friend....you write from a beautiful heart !

Bill - this is a normal format for you, and I'm happy to be reading this format once again - I love it. The way the two last lines rhyme and just fit so perfectly with the rest of the stanza... Anyway, this poem is wonderful. Your heart pours such beautiful, loving poetry. A master of the arts :)

Wow that is just simply amazing!! I loved every line, this is beautifully written!!

This is beautiful-magical and ethereal.I love the unique images.Such a great love poem.So very touching.

Gary Jurechka

The words you have written for your love are beautiful. Excellent poem! Take Care Cindy

The words you have written for your love are beautiful. Excellent poem! Take Care Cindy

Very nice and beautiful