Great job, but the flow is kinda messed up every now adn then...
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"Her eyes opened wide
Just before she died
As the last bit of life in her came through
She whispered her final words to him, "I love you" "

WAS a great way to end the poem, but since the first 2 lines are read quicker than the last it kinda drags the last 2 lines out.

Just some helpful tips
~Still a nice poem though 5/5
~Bryce

Oo wow i liked it a lot. 5/5

This is really sad but its a great poem, I like it alot! I gave it a 5/5.

As the last bit of life in her came through
She whispered her final words to him, "I love you"
This is the awesome part of the poem...tones of emotion through out it!
5/5
xoxo-am

This is a sad poem, but its very good. It paints an awesome picture by just reading it. You have awesome talent and to be able to write like that.