Wow, that was awsome...creepy though...lol
keep up the great work!
5/5

"The room is dark, small and cramped
My passport to hell is already stamped"

Fab opening! It set the tone for the rest of the poem prefectly.
A great dark piece, i got chills when i read it. =)
Excellent!
5/5
*Gem*

This is a cool piece-it reeks of darkness and haunting-I can relate to those aspects definitely.The images and flow are great.The ending is great.

GaryJ