Sounds like the person in question is very sad. :)
I do love this poem though, beautiful wording.
And wonderful flow.
Great job on it,
5/5

xSpiritedShadowx

I can fel the pane with yoù

Beautifully sad penned, though simply but well expressive emotions...

A excellent poem 10/10 and thank you 4 commenting mine keep the great work up xXx

Wow this is really sad but you are a really good writer.

Good job with this one.. it was the right length and you used really good emotional descriptive words! keep it up
amanda