Dear, such a romantic penned you potray here, so heartfelt emotions, yet breathtaking!

It was a good poem, even though it didn't rhyme, which I really don't like, usually. The two lines that stuck out for me which I loved were;

'And if I were the darkened sky
Then you would be those stars'

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your honest comments.

P.P.S. I don't think that 'God gave me a gift, stronger than love' was that good either. In fact, I pretty much completly agree with your comment.

P.P.P.S. Sorry for not commenting as much recently.

My gawd, this is probably my second favorite poem. You are excellent. This is just truly amazing. Words cannot express my love for this poem

I rly lyk dis poem, I like good love poems and this is definitely one of them, heartfelt, cute and well written. My fave stanza has to be the 4th cos its a beautiful image.
Beth xxx

Ooooh, you get a five from me, this was pretttyyyy!