Excellent poem. I gave a 5.
Would be nice if you made it a bit longer. But I liked it.

Red fades to brown,
though to hear not a sound?
But they don't admit.

^Niice.

N-G-C-S.

Hehe.
I understood what this poem was about before you explained it :p

I liked it.

Wow you have a really good point there. great poem, it would have been better if it were longer 5/5 x

It was a great poem written with the right intent. i understand now what you mean about people not understanding what you mean by your poetry... i liked the explanation... it made everything finally fall into place... the last paragraph/stanza... whatever u may call it was the best part in my opinion. very good wrting skills.

Your deepness is inspiring. Nice work!

I understood exactly what it meant hun :D so yea i think it snet a very positive message that may manipulate your reader :D

xxx alex xxx