It kind of goes to it's own beat forming two different images. The refreshing rain falling but hitting the gutter probably already bruised in the past.

I can't believe the stupid downvoters could do this to such a good poem! Don't let them get to you, they are just jealous! You have such excellent work and this is no exception! It was so sad, but so beautiful! Deffinatly a 5/5

jess ~

Like, i liked, it was very hmmm..? well i know what i mean sorry but i can't think of a positive enough word to sum up your poem but it is beautiful!! i love the way it is written and very cleverly as well!

I enjoyed this, it was really sweet.

Wow, this poem was very enjoyable and unique. I've never read one of this style before, but it is so beautiful and very touching. The title of the poem is so alluring, and I believe you put this one together very nicely. Keep it up! 5/5

I had to comment this one Jessy! I've tried this style only once, and I found it pretty hard to do, lol. Reading your one really made it look alot easier. You used perfect choice of wording to add that intense effect. But you didn't overdo it, which was great! You kept to the syllable counts, and rhyming scheme, which was also great. Awesome job, Jessy! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Very well done, I like that you are using different styles of poetry. Good Job.

Ciao, Joe

This poem was quite good. Lol. I always find it hard to write these styles of writings for some reason but you make it seem so easy to write. You had great flow and great vocabulary in this one too! 5/5 You're a great writer, keep it up!

Stephanie

This is really something.

This is good. but how do you change your name? i wanna change mine. please comment me back so i'll know. thx hunney.

This is a unique poem, u dont see much poetry like it on here... its hard to write a poem in this style and u pulled it off... well done

I loved the style of this. The shorter lines really made an impact and aded real punch to the words.

Something I love about your writing is that you manage to use a variety of different styles, and most importantly, make them work. This was wonderful. =]