Ha..this poem is funny, no offense if it wasn't meant to be but it portrays the funny side of some-thing dark!

Hooooooooooooly crap. Look at that! A number of o's I don't care enough to count but know it's alot.
That's how good this poem is.
Several o's good.

Damn that is the only thing I can say is Damn. I absolutely love this one and its sick twist. Keep up the good work.

Wow, this poem is amazing. I loved it. Keep up the great work. 5/5
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Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

keep it the great writting

Chan
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I liked it. it waz...... sickly sweet.
nice write.

I sincerely apologize i havent been able to comment lately, but i'll get on it.
where've you been... haven't got a msg in a while..

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