Comments : Wishing to be a bird

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    Wow... this poem is reallyb amazing ! better than the last one.. u got me jealous of birdys! :(.. sniff sniff

    especially bcoz of this --> I want to be able to mate with anyone I desire

    5/5 ! great one honey! keep those poems coming! =)

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Hehehehe!!!!!! BI i knew you would like that part!!!! im very happy that you liked it. i couldnt, actually wouldnt have written a poem about being a bird! this poem is all thnx to locky. he challenged me to write this poem. but im very proud that it turned out good. i thought it would be crappy cause i wrote it in less than 5MINS!!!!!!!! hahahaha!!!! that's what you get when you practice alot!! or maybe im just lucky!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    Lool! ure talented honey!! and its a GREAT poem! ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Oooooooooooooo...............thnx hun so are you!!!!!!! your my favorite poet!!! i learned from the master which is you!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Truly one of your best mai

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Thnx!!!!! well i coudnt have done it without you locks!!! XD

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    O0oh ! soo thats the famour friend locks!! hehe heard alot about u! ;)