I like it joe Keep up the good work

Jon aka CI_Rotten_Knowledge_

Aww! I loved it! It's so cute! You're such a sweet guy! I hope she says yes! Aww! :D

~~Spanish367

So sweet n lovely poem...

god bless u

Very cleverly written.

Awh, that was so sweet Joe. The descripitons were beautiful and the love really shone through. This line "And our hearts aglow" does not rhyme and that threw me off a little. Also, I think you should add an extra line into the last stanza or make the last line rhyme with heart. It would flow easier that way. Keep up the excellent work though. 5/5

Aww, so sweet.

I agree with what Miss.Huggable said, about one line not rhyming and advising you to add on an extra line on the last stanza.

It was very good, though.

Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
i friggin love that. that was wicked. omg. liz is one lucky gurl