Wow.. this is a very emotional poem, yet you wrote it so well.. i could feel all the emotions that you were portraying, and i could see an image of what was going on. you are very talented. the only thing that i would say is check over your poems once you have posted them as on here things like ( don't ) will becomesomething like ( don?!//?"t ) there are a few of these in your poem, but other than that, it was very touching. 5/5
Please could you read and comment on my poems, i'd like to know what you think, and how i can improve. thanks xx kirsty xx

Wow i really like that i seem to always fall for a guy with blue eyes too..idk what it is about them but you keep up the good work too. hey i have more poems

Hey i like it it's really good and i get what your trying to say in your poem keep it up its good

I really like this, It is full of emotion. I love the last stanza. 5/5 Awesome!

Wow .. its rele great ... i rele liked the way uve expressed ur self ... keep it up ...

Great write nice flow , feel the emotions in it and the pain, know the feeling, keep up the good work.
your friend Tracy ~~5/5

Yayaya i know directed to the blck guy huh... lol just playin so what up girl i miss u