Love ..Edited

by Hebe   Oct 30, 2006


Thanks to Tracy D Rollings for the very good suggestions to make this poem better. (I forgot to mention that when I edited this poem, sorry).
So thanks my friend!
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Love

Can you hold my arm,
everywhere I go
Can you feel my breath,
on your shoulder when it's cold
Can you see me when it's dark
Can you please never let me go

Do you always want to love me,
even when it's hard
Will we ever be together or just drift apart
Don't ever want you to leave me
Do you think it is too hard.

It always looks so easy,
but the contrary is true
Sometimes it goes really good,
and than I hope it's me and you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Niels

    O my god, this is really an emotional poem. Touched my soul! Very well written Hebetje!

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Fantastic.. A true yearning for all that love encompasses to come at the hard times as well as the easy. Well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ItS a wonderfuL expressioN.... 5/5

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    OH itS a lovelY writinG...i prefeR mucH... thankS lol.....

    luzaN