When I saw you

by Hebe   Oct 30, 2006


The first time I saw you,
you were a boy I couldn't reach.
Now I know, that whatever I do, you never see me.
Because I'm just a girl that dissolve in the multitude.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was great , it was short , but had a lot to say ,well written and good wording , all in all great job, your friend Tracy d,,,,,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Very Good Work.... Short and Powerfull message of Love.....:) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Very Good Work.... Short and Powerfull message of Love.....:) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jyzka

    Short but great! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Short but really good!!!
    good job!!!
    5/5

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