You captured exactly how i feel when its my birthday, i got butterflys thing of it. Nice one! 5/5

Well dedication penned to a friend, i'm sure she so thankful to have a friend like you, anyway thanks for your nice comment, much appreciated, take care.

I love the vocab in this poem, some really good use of language. My favourite line without a doubt is:

"A gentle breeze of another's joy can make you forget life's scars"

What a beautiful metaphor! A very cute poem to an obviously very special friend. Another lovely poem, 5/5

Em xXx

Aww....Very cute and sweet poem coming from a friend...Good job..

I cant remember when was my birthday u gorra be glad that u did