I disagree with you, i think this is excellent. It got better and better as you went on. I love the emotion in it, and the ending is amazing. I love how you wrote it. Even if you say you just had to get it out, you did a wonderful job of just writing it. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5

Tammie

Great poem. Says exactly what I feel probably every day.

Omg I love this.
I have felt like this so many times.
This poem caught my attention and kept it as I went on.
You are an excellent poet.
And also, I wish we could help people who are abused by lovers and family. And one of my friends was abused by her boyfriend, he never stabbed her or put her in intensive care, but threw her down the stairs. And she left him, but it inspired me and a song I heard.
And thanks for the comment.
You get a 5 out of 5 on this.

-Alex

Aww this nearly made me cry cuz i always push a my friend away even though i need her with all my heart its so good xoxox

Wow.
i give u major props!
this poem. i excellent.
i no were u coming from.
=]

Wow u cant say that its not good it was excellent full of emotion i loved it u get a 5/5 for sure, and thanks for the comment i just finished reading all your peoms. i must say there much better then mine for sure i will add for sure so when the next 1 u do i can read right away. i throw this out there if u ever wat to talk u can add me 2 msn if u want Plagued_With_Darkness@hotmail.com
if u dont its cool, hope to read more loved them all

Tgis piece is raw with emotion and it hits out so powerfully.
do hope writing this made you feel better in some way.

thanks a lot for your comments on my work.

peace
shobhana

This poem is amazing...
its unbelievably powerful and i really just love it. i love the ending, because i can relate. i always act like i dont need anyone else, i always tell myself that, even if im just screwing everything up. but the truth of the matter is, i DO need someone...everybody does....
i love how you wrote it....it was amazing....one of the best poems i have evereverever read....
it's beautiful. 5/5 for sure.

This is an excellent poem. it really expresses how we feel. well done.

Awe =] wow. this is really good. Deep..sad but very deep.
Good job! 5/5. Thanks for the comment too btw.

That was a great depiction of how lonely some one can be. i have a niece that's suffering with an illness and she has so much to do in life, but it's so short. You have hit something inside me to make me feel as if she's going to be just fine! You're very talented and so young. Remember you have so much to look forward to in life and your talent needs not to be wasted! You have a gift sweetie!!!!! And rememeber to smile it's contagious. Your comments are very valuable as well!

Wow, i think this poem is AMAZING!! This is so great i loved it. The amount of times i try to pretend to myself i am stronger than i really am and keep telling myuself i need no one and its just not true. I think you captured this brilliantly. Excellent write. 5/5

Kelly
xx

This is amazing. it's not bad at all.
I'm really sorry you had to go through that though...

This poem is fantastic! gee. I just read it over and over again. sad yes, but very nicely written.

5/5 David

*tear* so true!! yes...it is good!!!....acctually its great!

xo kisses xo

HOW DOES IT FEEL

FEEL

FEEL

ALONE

OMG man this was awesome!
ur really talented and to say that its not that great and u just had 2 let it out goes to show how great u r!
5/5 for sure!