Freddie.......this is just gorgeous****
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Woah that is insanely amazing!!!! GREAT POEM I COULD TOTALLY CONNECT!!

This poem is great. 5/5

Beautiful!!

I'm fine with death, I don't need you,

(And then I whispered Yes I Do).

Those lines were probably the most painful thing i had ever read. A sharp pain just shot through me. amazing poem and writing!!!

"I'm fine with death, I don't need you,

(And then I whispered Yes I Do)."

those lines are so painful and true. i loved the whole poem. love love loved it. amazing work and good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

Yeah this was incredible it rly spoke 2 me good job 5/5

This is really really good!

This is amazing and beautiful!!

My heart is so crushed right now and this poem literally describes how i feel.. Thank-you, I hope you feel better.