Wow, graphic and very powerful!

The poem was great it really touched me b/c i've tought about this before so anyway it's good to see poems about this out there

This was a really nice poem. i would change these two lines though, change the second let. i think the repition of let should be there. or maybe you just need some rewording.

Let the crimson blood flow
And let the darkness overtake you.

Wow thats so strong, and so goood x x x x