I agree, it's short, but very well done.

Very deep. Great job! and I agree. If it were much longer, it would ruin it. 5/5!

xxEvilAngelxx

Very good simple and deep 5/5

Absulotly amazing, you manage to capture so much emotion, in such a short poem. Very well written, and very smooth!

Very short but really good. and ur right if u put in more, it will ruin it. for me it's sort of confusing but it's really quite interesting! i like it! keep it up! 5/5 for me!

This is awesome just the way it is
the rhythm of the rhyme is perfect
The content is so profound that I could ponder the meaning forever

My initial inerpretation is, as the master says, we cannot direct the course of love
great job

Ahhhh....the subtle truth............

Short and simple, but beautiful. I liked this poem also. You have a wonderful talent. The flow of this poem was lovely, the picture that you painted was beautiful also. I really enjoy reading your work. 5/5

Letty