First time...

by Hebe   Nov 1, 2006


First time..

first time i heard you,
i heard it in your voice
i was devoted to you,
you left me no choice

first time i saw you,
i saw it in your eyes
i couldn't look away,
because it felt so nice

first time i touched you,
my heart beaded fast
you felt so warm,
i wanted it to last

first time i needed you,
you said you must go
i needed you to be with me,
i realized i love you so

by me and Dion

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Love it! It is beautiful!!! Really it is beautiful...

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Writing pleasure from you and the reading joy is from my end... be my creme guest cos I like your style of writing...

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    You ended your poem nicely.
    Good flow too..
    Beautiful poem.. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Welldon Hebe....:) It's good...:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie

    I realli like this poem.. great job. thanks for commentin on mine as well =]

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