Lie to Me....

by Bethan   Nov 1, 2006


You ask what you can do
to take away my pain,
But all I want you to do,
Is lie to me again,

I want you to lie to me,
And tell me that you really do care,
Lie to me,
and tell me you'll always be there,

I want you to lie to me,
and tell me no other can compare,
Lie to me,
and tell me our lives we will share,

I want you to lie to me,
and tell me there's nobody else,
Lie to me,
and promise it's in sickness and in health,

I want you to lie to me,
and make me believe that it's all true,
Lie to me,
'Cos I can't cope with losing you.

*I was thinking today about whther lies are ever good lies, and if it's better to lie. I concluded that the truth is always best but I still decided to write a poem from another perspective. I just really liked the idea of someone so afraid to lose someone that she'd ratehr be lied to cos it was easier than admitting things were falling apart.*

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  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    What a beautifully written poem!!!
    i love ur work and ur now on my faves list.
    the last 2 stanzas just amazing!!!
    cheak out my works,
    not much yet cuz im new to this site!!!
    kat-x-

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I LOVED the last two stanzas. Beautiful job! Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This poem better not be about you and I. Anyway, good poem. The one thing though which I thought, if changed is the third line of most of the stanzas. they were just too short in my opinion.

    Brad

    P.S. Don't forget, I still love you