Wow thats a amazing poem i can totally relate

Sad :( was an emotional poem and was beautifully written, well done :) 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Lovely poem Joe.
I thought it was very sweet.
:]

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

Wonderva poem, sad but sweet

I REALLY liked this one your so good keep up the good work I hope you didnt get to hurt

This was pretty good. Some awkward parts, but this is something good that I can relate to. Magnificent! 5/5!!

Wow, this is a great poem... very greatly written..... you are a talented writer...5/5

Very nice, Joe...

just one suggestion:
Stanza four, line one should be
"The way I always have"
or
"The way I've always done"

Wow its sad and fabulous at the same time!

Nice poem :)
keep on writing!

Hmm, this was good but I felt it lacked flavor. I found it to be just like any other love poem, it didn't have anything that made it stand out. Maybe if you added in some more emotion, details, or imagery this would be improved. Nice job though, the flow and rhymes worked well. 4/5

Awwww very good poem Joe, I think it was missing something....oh yes, Pink fuzzy handcuffs. Now thats a love poem for ya girl ;) lol 5/5

It was a bit better than some of the other love poems but it did lack taht something that made it stand out. THe imagery was not all there yet some of your poems are beautiful and full of it. It didn't have the emotion taht your life poems do have.But it stillw as a good poem.

Pretty good keep it up!

It was good... but the flow was off in a few places. one of my pet peeves is that ppl have like ten different rhyme schemes and stanza sizes in their poems... stay consistent, don't switch every stanza... alternating like three five line stanzas and 1 three line stanza etc etc, that's ok... but just randomly making different lengths and rhyme schemes, it drives me nuts! pretty good though, just revise some of it.

This poema was very nice...
it was soo sad... and filled with questions... the emotion in it was strong... and the words you used were amazing as well...
keep it up!

I think this is my favourite poem that I've read of yours. I really love the emotions which you let out in writing this.

Love job. 5/5.