Wow this is truly amazing. Are you a vampire? lol jj keep it up

Scary but i love it good Job yea.. r u a vampire.... lol i hope not!!!

Excellent job. I loved your word choice and imagery. Congradulations on winning my contest.

A perfect definition of a dark poem. Enough to grab the reader's attention, but not too morbid. Just enough to bring a shiver.

Great Job,
Jeannie

Woah this was a little over my head lol the words were great lol I just didnt know what some meant haha nice poem though imagery was great

Excellent poem very chilling