Hey i dont normaly read dark poems but this one was really kool, and also pretty different too. good work.

I like the imagery of this poem. But there is no flow or rhyming scheme, and those tend to fail. Sorry, but I still liked it. 4/5

I don't usually read dark poems, But I am glad that I did.
I enjoyed all of this, especially the imagery.
Very well written.

Well if this wasn't enough to give me goosebumps I don't know what was.. Like debbis your flow was a little off but its hard to maintain a good balanced poem without rhyming...very good though I enjoyed it!

This is really a great poem, you have done a great job. 5/5

Great write! Short and well.......deathly.

You were very descriptive in this and portrayed your emotions very well. I loved the lines:
I think about the hurt,
And the loneliness, felt throughout my life.
Those really stood out to me.. The flow and rhythm of this was very good. And the way that you ended it was very imaginative. I loved it. 5/5

Once again a very succinct well written piece, very concise but full of feeling.

5/5

Once again, your description wins my vote. I would have liked to see a specific rhyme scheme in here, though. Overall though -- good write.

This is a great poem because so many people turn to suicide when they feel they can't go on, but death is never the answer amazing 5/5 read a poem of mine called baby i love you similar to this u'll like it Karl Wild

Another great work, i really enjoyed reading this ,also i can related 2 this poem, another 5/5

WOW, yet another deep cutting poem.

Wow...this was so dark and powerful...and a wonderful read.
Excellent work on this.

Wow another great poem, keep up the great work