Very nice, i really enjoyed this, loved the start, loved the ending good job.

I realli like this poem...
it hurts. alot.
well check out mine if you get a chance xxx

OhEmmGee!

That is good!
i can relate.
=*(

5/5

Firstly, Thanks for taking the time to read one of my poems.

I was curious to why this particular poem got a high number of votes, and i found out the answer. The poem was very emotional, the pain was allthroughout the poem and i could really tell how painful it was for you. The notes under the poem made it more heartbreaking. i hope the best for you.