Comments : Battles

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    WOW thats a really good poem and is it aimed at a certain bucket??

    EWWW le Bucket haha!
    the poem was well written too =]=]=]
    Fab poem as usual Gem

    wuvz ya x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    He loves you so you have nothing to worry about :))

  • 17 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Strong emotion, nice write! guess ur really frustrated

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Brilliant. But remember i think guys usually are oblivious to this kind of thing. Just make sure your anger gets directed to the right person (or poetry is a good outlet hee hee). What i am trying to say is i think it is a great poem and i love the story behind it.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "I've given her so many chances
    There's not much more I can do
    It's like some kind of sickening war
    As she battles me for you..."

    This is a great stanza! I loved the poem! Very emotional! Lovely!
    xoxo